Sunday, June 30, 2013

Murray CH. 5 & 9



The title of this chapter seemed like it was inviting me as the reader to approach teaching the concept of writing in a new way. I went into this chapter knowing that I would come out of it, thinking in a new way. Just like when you are starting to build a house, you have to start with the foundation. In a writing course, you have to start with the rough draft. Like we have said in class already, it's called the rough draft for a reason. Without the skeleton of a paper, there is nothing for the students to work from, get feedback on, or simply read though and fine tune on their own. In order to be a writer, you need to write. Practice at anything will make that skill better overtime. I liked the idea that students should have time set aside in class for writing. Since writing is important to they are learning a craft, then it should take up some class time, to show the importance to them. Just like when we free write in class, it allows time to ourselves to simply relax and write about whatever comes to mind. Students look at writing in school as intimidating or scary, these are misconceptions that teachers need to be changing. Teachers need to start with writing activities, reading in class with reflection, and other little tasks that involve writing for fun, this way students may begin to see that writing is not a chore, but an opportunity to sit down and write out his/her thoughts.

syllabi for his courses. This got me thinking about my own classroom some day. I want to be the kind of teacher who puts so much time and energy into planning for my students. I never want to get stuck in a rut and always want to change up my teaching methods and techniques that I use. I thought that having multiple syllabi would allow him the freedom to change things up every once in awhile because of the planning that he has already gone through. As a matured teacher, he probably knows when it is time for a change, and hopefully through the years I will also get to that point.

I had never thought about an assignment being open or closed before. When assigning papers and topics for papers, I just assumed that the teacher would always be the one to give the prompt or idea. I guess I thought this would direct the learning in a certain way for a more controlled, focused learning environment. When thinking about teaching writing though, I guess part of the process is being confident enough in your skin to take more ownership in the writing. In this process, you as the teacher can help the student hone skills and give him/her things to work on, while the student is educating you on what his/her topic is. Furthermore, a student may be so jazzed about their topic that they will take more pride in writing and in the entire writing process. Now you have gone from pulling teeth to an excitement for what he/she is creating, because it was his/her own idea.

The deadline still has an importance. No writing would ever get accomplished without some form of accountability to get it completed. Even with the most dedicated person, if they don't have a time frame, the writing process would never end. Even an excellent writer would never be able to finish their first draft. Through this chapter I have learned to be more open minded about the writing process. I need to evaluate how and why I am assigning something, and encourage my students however I can, to write for any and every purpose imaginable.

It terrifies me to read my own writing after I have finished my first draft. In my head I know it is going to sound all terrible and nothing is going to mesh. Everyone needs a starting point. A rough draft gives you that first piece of writing that is ready for construction. I take criticism so harshly when it comes to my writing. I need to understand that everything in life takes time and effort to get better. I do desire to be a descent writer or a writer at all. I need to take the comments as information and not judgement calls; it's about my writing, not me as a person. Everyone needs to start somewhere.

The more people you have read your drafts, the more comfortable you will get in your writing. I also think that the information that they give back to you won't seem as harsh because they are each just giving their opinions and you have many to think about, sift through, and apply to your draft. I thought this was a great chapter to end with before class, due to the fact that we are going into the beginning stages of our first paper. The nerves can be put at ease right from the beginning and the writing process can begin. I believe also that it won't seem as bad also because I am going to be reading their rough draft just like they are reading mine.

Wednesday, June 26, 2013

The 3 Papst Mermaid Sisters


When I was little my sisters and I pretended that we were mermaids. We had a swimming pool and so it was easy to swim and pretend that we lived in the water. My power was one of healing. We would swim all afternoon, going on grand adventures – diving down to get sinkers was the extent. The skipper bugs that swam around in the pool were the enemy. If you got too close to them they would sting a little bit and so the goal was to stay away from them. Also we had salamanders that lived and swam around in the pool. They were scary enough for little girls and so they were the big enemy that we had to destroy. We had a staircase on one side and a jetted area on the other and so these were our safe-havens. We would carry one another to the safe-havens when one of us got stung or hurt, and then I would bring out my magic hand and cover the injury and then full recovery was given. I always wanted to be a healer because I thought that nothing harmful should ever happen to anyone. So when we would play, I would definitely want to have powers to heal anybody of anything that they had. My sisters always thought that my power was awesome. Big sister would always be there to save the day!

The 3 Papst Mermaid Sisters

Reflection on Murray Ch. 1,2 and 3 06.26.2013


Anna Papst
ENGL 408
Reflection on Murray
06.26.203

            From the opening pages of the book it addressed the issue of assuming where students are in their writing ability. This is a dangerous game because as teachers we want to teach them at the level that they are at and then build on what they know already and help them progress. However, without the accurate knowledge of students’ abilities, we don’t know how to appropriately help them get to where they need to be. Writing is thinking. Not only are we thinking about what topics we need to write about, we are also thinking about what topics to assign our students to write about. We are assuming too much that students are able to pick their own topics of interest and then being able to create a paper off of knowledge that they can find on their own. We, as teachers, need to be teaching them the methods and tools that go into writing and good writing. Writing is a process as well. The first time a student isn’t going to know how to produce a flawless paper, because it takes many drafts before it can be submitted and called complete. The learning process shouldn’t be a drag to students but seen as an opportunity to grow in their writing abilities. The model of the writing process was concise and seemed easy to adapt. Collecting, planning and developing ideas will make a paper flow. Planning was the idea that I latched onto the most. Sometimes I just go in and write the paper without making an outline or really thinking about the ideas that I am putting down. I end up going back to the beginning and creating that outline first again and then starting over from scratch. Without a plan, you aren’t going to get anywhere very quickly. It’s the same with a paper, if you don’t have your ideas mapped out, that paper is going to just sit there until you have some ideas or direction that you want to take it.
In the text it talked about the writer is the first reader. This point can often be scary because the reader doesn’t want to read his/her own work and see how it sounds etc. This step in the writing process is absolutely vital. You need to sit down and be able to pick your work apart and see where it needs polishing.
Drafting – Revising – Editing. “The writer’s moment of truth arrives when all the collecting and planning are completed and the writer faces the blank page.” (41) Sometimes it is easiest to start free writing your ideas. This will give you the length and a base structure to start with. I liked how the book called the first draft, the Discovery Draft. Really you don’t know how the first draft is going to end up, so it’s the first stab that you take at your paper. You always need to start somewhere. I journal on a frequent basis; so the point he made about keeping a daybook beside you while writing makes perfect sense. I don’t feel pressured when taking notes in a journal fashion. Then, just have the daybook beside you while writing can help you stay on track and make the writing process a smoother and more natural feeling. Writing: “it is a satisfying human activity that extends both the brain and the soul. It stimulates the intellect, deepens the experience of living, and is good therapy.” (73) These opening chapters had so much meat in them. There are so many tools and stories from other writers that are so useful in helping to teach writing. Writing is not a scary, frightening process, but an opportunity to create something the way that only you can create it, in written form.

Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Villainelle Project!

A VILANELLE!
I want to research how the villanelle was invented and the work that went into the idea. It is a complicated process. I want to also submit a perfected villanelle with the drafts that I have made with trying to create the perfected work.


How long is it going to take? How many times am I going to resharpen my pencil?
  At first this task may seem scary. So you just stick with it!

 I just thought this was funny, because villainelles are challenging and it's going to be hard to stick with the project until I have perfected it! Haikus are easy!

We'll see how it goes!
On my very first blog, I am going to say how kind of difficult it was to create it! I am housesitting right now for a family that has unhooked the internet at their house because they are gone for an extended period of time. Well this doesn't work that well when I have an online course . So my friends up the street are helping me out and letting me come over and listen to the lectures online.